There is something about this bench. A futuristic steel thing, dropped outside a sighing local pub and a hoarded off patch of derelict land, the hoarding lurching into the back of the sitter. Its one of the few places you can sit outside in Rusholme without smoking a shisha pipe. Early morning, there was an man there, nestled between the pub and the screaming dance posters, very early morning, just him there, and me walking towars him on my way to the bus stop. He was wearing a beige kameez, a brown Bhs coat and a standard issue bushy grey beard (that old men get from the standard issue old grey beard shop -I’ve placed my order!). He looked up at me, but his eyes were far away, I imagined sunrise in the hills of the Punjab but perhaps he was running around the streets of Barcelona in his mind.
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Steel Bench
No, there is no mystery about the bench. It is there... yea, there. Fixed. Has caressed countless bottoms. And with a bit of luck will carry on doing so for the foreseeable future... And, as for The Man, well, vaguely mysterious - seeing as he paused long enough to allow you inspect the inside of his coat... to confirm its Bhs heritage you see. Now, the REAL mystery is The Woman. Yes, the only human in the actual photo... see how closely you tell us about The Man, yap, the one that's NOT in the photo. But not a word about The Woman. The Woman in the blue jacket, walking into your camera's eye. Yap, that one. Is this what's called 'deflective narrative'?! Ah. I get it now.
Deflections
I see you have the eye of a zen master, Ghostly. I did think about that: I saw a man, yet the photo shows a woman; I talk of age, yet the woman shines youth, I describe what is absent, yet I omit what is present; My tone was cautious, jaded, yet the woman's eyes contain optimism, openness; the photo is taken in broad daylight, my tone was dusk to blanket darkness. With the woman, the piece is written completely differently. Since blogs are fun experimental things, I will write the piece inclduing the woman, and you may (or may not!) observe how the shifts occur (or don't!)
-Pete