Early Mornng
Wed, 22/09/2010 - 07:44 — Pete Kalu
Early Morning
Sometimes, drifting out of sleep,
I wonder what street is it outside
Which woman is lying in my arms and
Did she bring a spare set of clothes,
Or will she require breakfast
How many legs do I have
Do I have to report for work today
Am I married right now
How old am I, am in a hotel?
Comments
Like it Pete. Some men have
Like it Pete. Some men have all the luck.
I guess
it may not read always as i expected though Sarah Nur's interpretation is closer to the mood I intended - a vague anxiety / disconcerting. perhaps I should alter the last line so it is more closely reverberates with that mood? -Pete
male/female response maybe
male/female response maybe :-)
Yes I would omit 'sometimes'
really enjoying reading this
really enjoying reading this . Like the unsettling feeling it creates.
thanks though umm
thanks though that first word 'sometimes' .. I'm not sure about it... -Pete