2 Good
Thu, 26/02/2009 - 21:00 — Melanie Duncan
They say, you’re too good to be true
I say I deserve the best
You say I maybe some day
Comments
I love poems like this and
I love poems like this and they are difficult to write . Wendy Cope does this very well and I admire her style and this is what it reminds me of.
Trying to work out last line -is it saying that this person really isn't that good because of the way 'he' speaks in the last line? bit of a riddle which is a good thing - all depends on the energy and patience of the reader!
Nice x
3 Good
A three liner - an applause for brevity! I like the switching between 'They', 'I' and 'You'
I 'get' the first two lines, but not the last line!