I wish
Fri, 27/02/2009 - 10:11 — Loreen Williams
I wish you was here to see my tears
I wish you was here to hear my fears
but instead your gone i'm all alone!
wishing you was here to listen to me moan
Nothing feels the same since your gone
just this big empty space feels like somethings wrong
God please hear my cry show me things will be alright
take this pain away and give me peace
a moments rest so I can sleep
Time heals people say but why am i still here feeling this way...
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I wish
Hi again!
You're probably sick of hearing from me by now, but i just wanted to say that I can really relate to this piece as I've also had a lot of loss in my own life, having lost an awful lot of friends and family since the age of 15 (I'm 34 now). I like the fact that you've held on to the happiness that this person (or indeed these people, if in fact it has happened a few times) brought to your life and we as human beings should never lose sight of that. One thing I've found on a personal level is it's important to keep going, no matter how bad things appear because they always improve in the end.
Well written!