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Fri, 27/02/2009 - 10:14 — Loreen Williams
Sat here crying thinking what a creap
they way he lies and cheats
says im the only one but theres otheres to be seen.
He goes out comes back late! saying he has a meeting
you see the lies as he sneaks.
I told myself he woulden't cheat
but he seems to stutter when he speaks
all the hurts just drained out of me now my knees are weak.
I ask myself while he sleeps why im still here?
and i come up with the answer I love him!
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Hello again!
I get the impression that the subject of this piece (if indeed it is the very same person you've written about in your other poems) has really let you down and hurt you quite badly. Although I really like this, I'm starting to get the impression that this experience has affected you deeply. It would be nice for you to write about your recovery from this relationship to indicate that there is a positive outcome to all that painful stuff!