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Where Your Commonword Blogs Go
By Ed Kangai
Part1
We of the Honesty Party
Honestly haven't a clue
Besides, why would you expect a politician
To be clean, forthright, ethical
Get Real! do
Yes! We Stand For Principles
...'um...err-'a...o..our PR man will fill you in there
More BS like that we can honestly promise you
This, next, and every forthcoming year
Part2
We, Her Majesty's Government, are a pack of scoundrels
You'd anyway work that out soon enough
Talking straight clears the air at times
- I don't at this point speak off the cuff
Yeah; they voted us in fair and square
" Chanje Kunda & Cultureword present Speakfreely."
It was good after a long time away to step back and catch this event. The bar was crowded. I came late and missed a few poets (sorry to them!). The blend of musicians and poets was throwing up interesting performances. I sipped my orange juice and stayed. What did I think of the performances? Chanje was a charming, generous host, there were some superb poets doing their stuff, too many to mention. And there was something else...
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Compound words, we use them all the time. They feel natural through usage and are being continuously coined. Seems to me though that we don’t get enough of them coined in fiction and poetry.
Anglo-Saxon poetry used compound words to avoid repetition of the same word. e.g. sea is referred to as ‘whale-road’, ‘swan-way’, ‘sail road’
Contemporary usage includes literally thousands of words, e.g. breakneck, paperclip, sandstorm, fingerprint, handbag
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Thanks to all those poets who turned out to the Oldham Failsworth poetry event who made it such a warm and fun filled evening. (That front row of kids - they should be hired to heckle hosts right, they did it so well!)
It was the kind of event where the beginnings of great things can be felt. There was a mixture of experienced and new poets, and of polished material and new writing being tried out. I was particularly pleased with the asurance of the new poets - one of them had never taken to the stage before to read and he really did well.